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2014年密云一模要玩就玩最好的作文 有烦恼向谁说

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??? 提示词语:understand,? same / different,? tell,? love,? help

2014年密云一模要玩就玩最好的作文 有烦恼向谁说


Dear Kate,
I’m glad to hear from you.___________________________________________
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参考范文Possible version:
? Dear Kate,
??? I’m glad to hear from you. I know most students will go to their classmates or friends when they are in trouble, because they can talk with each other and understand each other easily. But I’m different from them. If I’m in trouble, I’ll tell my parents or my teachers because they are older than my classmates or friends, so they have richer experiences. What’s more, they love me all the time and I know they are always ready to help me out.
In my opinion, everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So it’s a good idea to ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help.
????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Yours,
??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Meimei
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书面表达评分标准
说明:先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次,然后在该档次内评出分数。
第一档:(13—15分)
??? 完全符合题目要求,表达思想清楚,内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇,语言通顺,语意连贯,具有逻辑性。满分无任何语言错误。
第二档:(9—12分)
??? 符合题目要求,表达思想基本清楚,内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺,语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误,但不影响整体理解。
第三档:(5—8分)
??? 部分内容符合题目要求,表达思想不清楚,内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多,语言不通顺,影响整体理解。
第四档:(0—4分)
??? 与题目有关的内容不多,不能表达出自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示词语,所写内容难以理解。

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